[childrenofbodom]

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...9C41BF63CA26E6


hey y'all my band just got done with instruments, heres 1 of 7. after we add vox, mix and master i'll put up the rest.

check out the quality compared to whats on the myspace site in my sig...

anyway we have a show coming up this saturday. its a house party with a bunch of death ****l bands. somewhere in inglewood, come check us out if you can.

[SAIIALEX]

Here's some constructive criticism.

You guys are better than a lot of the "local" ****l bands I hear. Good leads, good drumming, etc. I'd have to hear the vocals to make a good call on them.

However, if I had to pick out one thing that I didn't like it would be the repetition. I didn't like the amount of times you would repeat a riff and go back into something else I had already heard. Remember, you can still have a verse/chorus kind of structure and take a few chances with the composition. Also, don't underestimate what a well-placed fill can do to keep the song interesting.

Keep it up, you guys have a ton of potential.

[ame206350]

Originally Posted by childrenofbodom

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...9C41BF63CA26E6


hey y'all my band just got done with instruments, heres 1 of 7. after we add vox, mix and master i'll put up the rest.

check out the quality compared to whats on the myspace site in my sig...

anyway we have a show coming up this saturday. its a house party with a bunch of death ****l bands. somewhere in inglewood, come check us out if you can.

Sounds good. I got a good Iron Maiden vibe from some of the guitar work. The vocal will make or break this track. Obviously you guys can play. Rock on!

[childrenofbodom]

thanks for the feedback guys.

heres the re-recorded finalfantasy song, its an instrumental so yeah.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.ph...3888801180ED54

[Iron Blade]

Kickazz

[blood_fr3ak]

To weak for my taste.