[Torrid]

... at first glance I read "should I keep raping"... the answer would be no.

But as for Rapping, that beat was pretty fresh. I wouldn't say go throw your future into the basket and hope you're the new 50 Cent or some shit but yeah, keep it up.

[Pillbox Joe]

The ones that make it are always the ones that drop out of high school and maybe land some jail time. It gives you street cred in the rap business. I say drop out of school, go commit some random acts of violence, and your chances of getting signed are going up exponentially. Think of it as a career move.

[omgitsrick]

Originally Posted by Pillbox Joe

The ones that make it are always the ones that drop out of high school and maybe land some jail time. It gives you street cred in the rap business. I say drop out of school, go commit some random acts of violence, and your chances of getting signed are going up exponentially. Think of it as a career move.

This man is wise, also consider getting shot a few times so you can rap about it all the time.

[Rinksterk]

As a hiphop fan, listening to recycled topics like bitches and shit really get tiring. Talk about something original. I believe art/music is a honest expression of yourself. Is the shit you talk about really you?

[CsRyan]

The production was pretty good. the rapping was kind of weak. like everyone else said, it was trite and repetitive.

[DarkKnight]

Originally Posted by Rinksterk

As a hiphop fan, listening to recycled topics like bitches and shit really get tiring. Talk about something original. I believe art/music is a honest expression of yourself. Is the shit you talk about really you?

Agreed with this.

You've got a nice flow...change up the subject matter a bit.

[omgitsrick]

Gonna be straight up honest with you homecake, your flow wasn't that great, and the beats weren't that great either. Maybe I'm just comparing you to too high a standard, I'm sure I couldn't do any better.

[Full_Beserker]

At least your trying, more power to you

[ZachD009]

thanks for the input guys!

[EpicDonkeyPunch]

Your shits good man. The music scene is just crazy man. Its sad because you obviously have talent, but in reality the odds are stacked agianst you. Then you have some bullshit "superman that hoe" gargabe which is talentless junk, and that guys just blows up. Much Music and MTV just depresses me.