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First let me say that I say I'm not saying that you aren't intelligent. I have no idea if you are and really don't care. But, youre writing tries to sound smart which only comes off as arrogant and obnoxious. If you really want to engage your audience, not just come off as “enlightened” and self important, approach the reader as an equal. If you wouldn't use a word in normal conversation then don't use it in a paper.
Other than that, even being the good leftist that I am, the truth is not always best. Sometimes the people must be kept uninformed, if for no other reason than that is how they want to live. And the laws you call unnatural are a very natural extension of nature. Man is a violent species to its fellow members– the same as a bull moose during mating season or a silverback gorilla with a nonreceptive female. Like it or not its only natural for the strong to take command over the weak.
The question is how to work around our unfortunate nature and safeguard the masses from those who would do them harm.
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