I mean this constructively but I found the writing style to be rather clunky. As a US based english speaker I know that there can be different word usages in New Zealand of course. However a lot of the sentences there definitely raised an eyebrow...
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In reality Schilt has nothing more to prove as he has beaten pretty much everyone who was supposed to be a tomb raider of his success. With every passing day it gets brighter, where he has come to an acropolis of his career.
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That definitely doesn't seem like the correct usage of acropolis, or tomb raider for that manner. There are other grammarical stuff that I would point out but that stuck in my mind the most.
Anyway just wanted to add a bit of constructive criticism.